Score: 2

"I don't know..."

submission: Chris & Harry

date: November 11, 2008

Not to be a killjoy or anything but this isn't your best work. Grand Theft Awesome is (at least in my mind).

This was not original. DBZ parodies are so overdone. I did like the scene with the stressed out business man. It just seemed so random haha

Score: 8

"Ha!"

submission: Hungry

date: November 9, 2008

Fun cartoon! Really well animated, too I might add! Short and sweet.

The only thing I would fix is the synching in some areas.

Score: 0

"wow..."

submission: The Sicksons

date: July 31, 2008

Quite frankly, that was the worst thing I've seen in a while. The voice acting was god awful, the plot seemed utterly pointless, I had no idea what the hell was going on, the "jokes" were extremely immature and tasteless, and it was just overall unfunny. 30 seconds of my life wasted...

Score: 0

"I just tabbed"

submission: Where's Billy?

date: June 28, 2008

this game is so easy to cheat on

Score: 10

"Amazing game!"

submission: Music Catch

date: June 10, 2008

Amazing song too!

Score: 8

"Pretty cool"

submission: -StopSkateMotion-

date: June 6, 2008

I like the use of my music. The concept is very original. And I like how you don't erase the skater as he moves along. It's like he's leaving a trail of himself behind... All I ask is smoother animation and a longer version and it'll be awesome.

Score: 6

"Hey I just noticed you used my music!"

submission: Mohiko Go Home

date: May 14, 2008

I really like the concept of the game and you're really getting there. The character is really hard to control and the background looked rather fake. I really think you should spend more time on the graphics as well as the action script. You say this took three days to make and a week to learn the action script? I think you should spend more time making this. Don't just churn it out. Spend time on it.

I also believe the levels become hard way too quickly. I know it's only 5 levels but you should create more levels and spread out the difficulty more

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Tankmen Infinity

date: May 2, 2008

"fuck you, fuck you, fuck you, fuck you, you're hot, fuck you"
"we're about to slice this prick's dick off, shove it up his ass and make sarcastic comments like 'go fuck yourself.'"

Best pico day submission ever. I hope you guys win.

Score: 5

"No..."

submission: Smash Bros. X: Gaiden

date: April 7, 2008

I liked this one a bit more but again, there are numerous problems with your Smash Bros. X work.

1. Animation was still heavily lacking and unrealistic looking
2. Remember that Super Sonic is INVINCIBLE! He can't just go back to normal because he was hit by some giant green energy ball. You need to think of a way to work around that.
3. The ending was really confusing. Some guy just walks in with a Bob-omb and Sonic and Luigi don't run from it. That's a stupid ending.
4. I liked the pictures at the beginning but what does the one with Kirby and DK have to do with anything?
5. The fight looked more convincing but you do the freeze frame thing too much. That only works once or twice at a time in a fight scene. It just shows your lack of commitment to the animation.

Overall, it was a rather boring, mediocre submission. It has it's moments but these moments are overshadowed by mediocre animation (or lack of) and the still unconvincing fight.

But then again, this was submitted 6 years ago so I assume your animation skills are much better now... I hope.

You also have good drawing skills. You should focus more on that.

Score: 3

"Not so good"

submission: Smash Bros. X

date: April 7, 2008

There are so many things wrong with this submission:

1. The Sonic vs. Mario thing is so overdone (but after looking at the submission date, I'll let that slide, since a lot of those were submitted around that time)
2. You've managed to get through the submission with little to no animation. That's not a good thing. Add more animation.
3. Sonic can't just turn super like that. He needs the Chaos Emeralds.
4. Super Sonic was moving too slowly to look realistic
5. The fight progressed too slowly for it to be a convincing fight. It just doesn't look natural. It just looks like it was staged

But I liked your choice of music and the sprite animation was a nice touch.